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Title: Plaything
Rating: G
Pairing: Sam and 3:12 spoiler [gen]
Disclaimer: fic tion / the act of feigning, inventing, or imagining
Author's Note: Originally there was a park and a dream and Sam realizing what needed to be done - what he had to do but I can't write for shit so instead ... There's this.


She says, "Come play with me."

He says, "I'm not going to play with you."

She grins at him and asks again.

He glares and refuses again.

She says, "Sam."

He says, "I'm not a plaything."

She stomps her feet and threatens to kill a bunch of innocent people - Bobby included.

He starts reciting Latin.

She says, "Dean only has a couple of months left."

He says, "I know."

She sits cross legged on the floor drawing patterns with her fingertips.

He watches her carefully.

She says, "I know who holds the contract to Dean's soul. Do you, Sam?"

He says, "No, I don't."

She says, "Come play with me."

Date: 2008-02-22 09:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/misread_/
This was written in a very vivid way. Awesome. ♥

Date: 2008-02-22 09:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pippilottah.livejournal.com
This gave me chills. Creepy but in a good way.

Date: 2008-02-22 09:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] certainthings.livejournal.com
Really? You're not just saying that? Because I was going for creepy but was afraid it came off boring and stiff.

Date: 2008-02-22 09:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pippilottah.livejournal.com
I wouldn't say it if I didn't mean it so yes, really. Did not come off as boring at all.

Date: 2008-02-22 09:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] certainthings.livejournal.com
:) this is comforting.

Date: 2008-02-22 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sj0126.livejournal.com
ruby is so creepy. i love it.

Date: 2008-02-22 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sj0126.livejournal.com
oh god even creepier. that little kid scares the bejesus out of me.

Date: 2008-02-22 09:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] certainthings.livejournal.com
I really sort of enjoyed her.

Date: 2008-02-22 09:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sj0126.livejournal.com
oh i enjoyed her, she scares me. she's supposed to, seeing as she's the new big bad and all

Date: 2008-02-22 09:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bitterbird.livejournal.com
oh creepy! awesome awesome work this was wonderfully done

Date: 2008-02-22 09:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] certainthings.livejournal.com
*blinks* thanks

Date: 2008-02-22 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gwendolynmstacy.livejournal.com
That part where she stomps her feet, I could picture it. Creepy.

Date: 2008-02-22 09:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quidditchkiss.livejournal.com
Creepy.
But I fuckin' love it. And you. :>

Date: 2008-02-22 09:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] certainthings.livejournal.com
I was aiming for creepy. So uhm, thank you.

Date: 2008-02-22 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] quidditchkiss.livejournal.com
You achieved it. :)
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Date: 2008-02-22 09:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] certainthings.livejournal.com
Holy. Thank you.

Date: 2008-02-22 10:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delicatelight.livejournal.com
Oh, man. That is so creepy. Really well-written, but creeeepy.

Date: 2008-02-22 10:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] certainthings.livejournal.com
\o/ Thank you. I was hoping the creepy came across.

Date: 2008-02-22 11:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] micheleeeex.livejournal.com
Really creepy. Very well-written though. :)

Date: 2008-02-23 12:12 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-02-23 12:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] memphis86.livejournal.com
Oooooooooooh.......

I picture Lilith dangling Dean in front of Sam like a marionette. Maybe she TURNS him into a doll.

Date: 2008-02-23 12:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] certainthings.livejournal.com
That could be fun. I kind of was picturing her using Sam as a pony.

Date: 2008-02-23 01:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] memphis86.livejournal.com
That could work too, if she held out a picture of Dean on a pole and made him gallop.

Date: 2008-02-23 01:07 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-02-23 04:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pushingyouaway.livejournal.com
...oh wow

i like it. intriguing...


you need to write more, meesha. you really do


*cake*

Date: 2008-02-23 07:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] certainthings.livejournal.com
:) I don't but thank you.

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