"He took a look around the room and decided to leave a note for her on her desk "Gwen, stopped by you might have been out -- Peter." He turned and went back out the way he came. He knew Gwen would find it.
/Am not helping but there's also the three act pyramid
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Date: 2012-08-20 02:28 am (UTC)/Am not helping but there's also the three act pyramid
Just use continuation without 'And then' ... Which reminds me of this. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hRN9zj7WLR0&feature=youtube_gdata_player
If it helps my class starts in 5 weeks. Hopefully my fwded materials help.
(And thank you for the icons when you have time)