OMG, I loled so hard at this, especially "I want to punch these words in the face," because LOL. Idek. It's like they're trying for a more conversational kind of prose and it's just... nonsensical. What book is this? Did it have the world's most blind editor? Good lord.
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Date: 2011-01-03 03:59 am (UTC)